First Impression :4/5: Clean & simple.

Username & Title :5/5: I like your username, because it has personal meaning for you – being enough so that you named your son Hunter. The title is self-explanatory, the thing that is the most important in your world (your son) is the theme.

Layout :18/20: You have a lot of room for extras that you have put to good use. It is obviously self designed, and I don’t really see anything at all wrong with the layout. I also like the pictures of Hunter. He is adorable… and I’m not lying. It adds a lot of personal flair and individuality to your layout. You’re obviously a proud mommy, and aren’t afraid to show it.

Content :18/30: Ok, first off – Hunter is adorable. I’m serious. He’s going to be a lady killer when he’s older. Any baby that sports a Mohawk is adorable in my book.

Although I do find Hunter so adorable, it’s hard for me to get into your diary because I’m not a mother and I don’t know what you’re going through with raising this child, and yadi yadi yada. Wait – someone asked you if you pluck his eyebrows? That *IS* kind of weird. That brings questions to my mind about what the hell they do with their kids.

You talk like you’re much younger than what you are, and you don’t use proper grammar like capitalization for proper nouns such as ‘Hunter’ and you say ol instead of old. It’s a little annoying when I’m trying to get into your diary. It’s a pet peeve of mine. Also, there is nothing that truly interest me in your journal, because it’s either all about Hunter or it’s just explaining what you did that day which really doesn’t make me want to continue reading. Matter of fact, I skipped a lot of entries out of pure boredom, and to see if you had made any improvement in your more recent entries.

You did get a little bit better about your grammar problems, and I found that I really liked this entry because it explained a lot about how you felt with your relationship with Hunter’s dad. All in all, this diary definitely isn’t for me, because even after I tried to concentrate I felt my mind wandering to other things. It just didn’t captivate me enough to want to keep on reading. I’ll say this for you, you’re a damn good mother.

Contact :3/5: Notes, guestbook, e-mail. I think that’s enough, although I’m not sure why you would count MySpace.

Errors :5/5:Everything looks like it’s the way it’s supposed to be.

Extras :5/5: Uhm… yeah. About us, cast & crew, photo intro, photos, videos, growth chart, reviews, diaryrings, quizzes, photo tips, and friends & reads . Overkill, perhaps?

Squirt :18/20: From reading this, it seems that we have a lot of the same views and I can understand a lot of what you were talking about. Especially your views on religion and how you feel about your diary – it IS for you to vent. The only thing that I didn’t like was when you said ‘For Reals.’ It just bothered me for some reason, but whatever.

Will I Come Back? :0/5: Probably not.

Extra Points :10/: 10 points for grand opening.

Final Score :81/100:

Reviewed By :Liz: