First Impression :3/5: Black and pink. The black is depressing but the pink adds a hint of happiness. I don't like the tagboard on the main page. Possibly putting it on it's own page would make your diary seem a bit more organized?

Username & Title :3/5: I like your username. For-You-Only. To me, it screams "desperate and vulnerable". Like your whole life depends on one person...Or maybe it just means that your diary is for YOU only. Well either way, it gets my brain juices moving.

I'm not so keen on your title though. "Why Am I Crying Again? Why don't you care?" I think it would be ok if the whole thing was capitalized. But why is the first half capitalized and the last half isn't? Is the first half more important?

Layout :11/20: The first thing that jumps out at me is that dang tagboard! It's so tacky and unappealing. I would really suggest putting it on it's own page. I think it's cool that you made your own layout. It's not my favorite layout, because it's really big. But it fits in my screen as long as I have it open all the way, so I suppose I can't really complain. I don't like how your navigation is called "Site Map". Maybe I'm just a dumbass, but I seriously thought for a moment that you didn't have any navigation because I didn't know that "Site Map" was a button.

Honestly, I think if your layout was different (possibly smaller with a smaller font) I would like reading it more.

Content :24/30: Ok so I've been reading your diary for a few weeks now. When I first started reading it I was like "What the fuck? This ho-bag is crazy!". But something drew me back each time to read more. Maybe it's like a car accident, can't help but look at it. But maybe it's more than that. You are definitely not someone I'd want to be friends with in real life. You're selfish, you whine a lot, you're whorish, you talk too much about sex and you're only 16, and you're the kind of kid that I usually make fun of. But just reading your diary, I've found that you are a real person. You have feelings (although those feelings usually have to do with nakedness or self-centeredness) and you have just as much right as everyone else to express them. So even with all of those people telling you that "you are what's wrong with the internet" or "you're a stupid bitch" or whatever it is that they say, keep writing. And don't do it for other people, do it for yourself. You tend to write mostly for other people to read and they can sense that. It comes off as you looking fake. So just write for you, don't worry about other people reading it. Maybe then, people will be able to get at the inner "you" instead of just the front you put on.

With that being said, I think you should DUMP Travanti (he seems like an ass) and stay SINGLE for a while. Figure out who you are and what you want to do on your own. Be independent and don't rely so much on Travanti to keep you happy. Trust me, it's not a good situation to put yourself in. Oh, and I actually kinda like your diary. I'll probably be back to see how things play out.

Contact :5/5: Notes, guestbook, email, tagboard, comments.

Errors :3/5: Your links work fine, no little red x's anywhere. Your grammar is ok, but maybe you should PROOFREAD before hitting the submit button! I hate typos. They annoy me. Even when I do them myself.

Extras :5/5: You have a shitload, I won't even go into it.

Squirt :15/20: Could have been a little more in depth. Loved your answer for the last question. It says pretty much what I just said about not being fake and putting on a front. WRITE FOR YOURSELF!

Will I Come Back? :5/5: Yeah, probably.

Extra Points :10/: 10 extra for being one of the first 10 customers at RubyRedRevue! (Damn, I didn't realize how much 10 points was!)

Final Score :84/100:

Reviewed By :Kelley: